Write presenting information in logical order helps coherence.
Coherence means establishing a.
relationship between the ideas presented in a paragraph. It brings about a
rationale in the arrangement of the ideas which are introduced either in the
chronological order or in the order of importance. Besides, transitions that
compare, contrast, illustrate, add or show cause and effect build logical bridges.
The ideas, thus expressed in the paragraph, flow smoothly from one to the other
in a logical sequence. This helps the reader to understand the paragraph.
Let us now analyze our
model paragraph for unity and coherence:
THE HUMAN BODY:
(i)
The human body is a wonderful piece of work that nature has created.
(ii)
It is not beautiful like the body of a butterfly or peacock but it is shaped
practically.
(iii)
It can do many types of work which other animals cannot.
(iv)
It is not strong like the body of a tiger.
(v)
But in place of physical strength it has a big and sharp brain.
(vi)
By using this brain the human physique has been able to overcome many of its
limitations.
(vii)
By sitting in an aero plane it flies faster than a kite, by riding a motorcycle
it travels faster than a leopard, and by firing a machine gun it fights much
better than a tiger.
(viii)
In spite of all this, the human body suffers from many diseases because it has
a weakness for habits such as smoking, drinking and overeating.
(ix)
When it is healthy the body can give great pleasure but when it is sick it can
cause great pain.
(x)
The wise man would always keep his body fit because a healthy mind can work
only in a healthy body.
The first sentence states the main
idea of the paragraph and claims the superiority of the human body over the
rest of the creation. It enables the reader to expect the following ideas in
the paragraph that explain and illustrate the qualities and attributes of the
human body.
The second, third, fourth, fifth,
sixth, and seventh sentences compare, contrast, elucidate and justify the main
idea or topic sentence. They establish the main theme with logical explanations
and transitions. They create a graphic picture in the minds of the reader with
suitable and appropriate language expressions. In brief, they develop the main
idea of the paragraph.
The eighth and the ninth sentences
interpret and analyze the limitations of the human body and prove the strength
of the topic sentence. They, further, lead the main idea into a concluding
thought.
Finally, the tenth sentence concludes
with the idea that the human body should be well preserved for a proper
functioning of the system and that a healthy mind can work only in a healthy
body.
Thus the paragraph, The Human Body,
is a unified and coherent paragraph.
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