Provide some guidelines to construct effective sentences.
Guidelines to construct
effective sentences
(i) SENTENCES SHOULD
CONTAIN ONLY ONE IDEA: Sentences that contain more than one
idea weaken the message. Too many ideas expressed without a pause tend to run
together in the reader’s mind.
(ii) SENTENCES SHOULD
CONTAIN ONE COMPLETE THOUGHT: A group of words that
gives merely part of an idea is a sentence fragment. Because a sentence must
express one complete thought, a sentence fragment is not a sentence. A fragment
splits one thought into two parts.
(iii) SENTENCES SHOULD BE
WRITTEN IN THE ACTIVE VOICE: Effective writing creates
force through the use of action verbs - those used in the active voice rather
than the passive voice. In Chapter 1, active and passive voices were defined
this way: ACTIVE VOICE The subject of the sentence performs the action
described by the verb. PASSIVE VOICE The subject receives the action described
by the verb.
(iv) SENTENCES SHOULD BE
GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT: Basic English errors in sentences
may make the receiver think the sender is ignorant or careless - or both. What
is good English, and what are the rules of good. English? The “rules” are
actually general agreements among the users of English on how to use the
language for various purposes in various circumstances. Your goal as a
successful communicator, is to use the rules followed by the majority of
skilled writers and Speakers in the business world.
(v) SENTENCES SHOULD BE
PUNCTUATED CORRECTLY: Commas are perhaps the most troublesome
of all punctuation marks. Placing commas incorrectly or otherwise misusing them
may cause the meaning of sentences to be unclear. The reader may then need to
reread sentences several times to understand the intended meaning.
Commas are misused in three ways:
(a) They
are omitted where they are needed.
(b)
They are inserted where they are not needed
(c) They
are misplaced within the sentence. In each case the reader's understanding is
usually hindered. One common mistake is to omit one of a pair of commas.
For example, commas are needed to set
off appositives or explanatory expressions. In the following example, the
editorial assistant is an appositive, which should be set off by commas. By
omitting one of the commas the sentence conveys a different meaning.
(vi) SENTENCES SHOULD BE
CONCISE: Concise communication uses as few words as possible
to communicate the message in a clear, courteous manner. Whether long or short,
a sentence should be concise. Concise is the opposite of words; it is not the
opposite of long. If your sentences are concise, the contain no wasted words.
You have already learned to avoid needless repetition and to use concise words
anti phrases. You know it is important not to use three or four words to
express an idea if one or two words express the idea as well. Now continue a
step further in the communication building process earn to write concise
sentences.
(vii) SENTENCES SHOULD BE
VARIED IN LENGTH: For quick, clear, easy reading all sentences
should be short and simple, right? Wrong Sentences averaging around 17 words in
length are considered about right for fast reading. Good sentences can be
longer than 20 words or as short as 4 or 5 words for variety and emphasis.
Imagine the monotony of a message in which each sentence is exactly 17 words
long. The message might put the reader to sleep! Varying sentence length can
enliven writing style. A short sentence placed between two long sentences
emphasizes the thought of the short sentence.
(viii) SENTENCES SHOULD
BE VARIED IN STRUCTURE: We have already seen that a long
string of very short sentences makes for choppy writing, that a sequence of
very long sentences makes reading difficult, and that sentences all the same
length makes a letter boring to read. Another shortcoming that affects the
reader's reaction is identically constructed sentences. A series of sentences
having the some construction becomes, monotonous and may seem to talk down to
the reader. Besides varying the length of your sentences, you should also vary
their structure and pattern. One way to achieve variety in your writing is with
different sentence beginnings. Since the way you begin a sentence usually
determines the pattern for the sentence as a whole, concentrating on the beginnings
is a logical way to control sentence patterns. You can also vary the structure
of your sentences by utilizing a combination of simple, compound, complex, and
compound-complex formations.
(ix) SENTENCES SHOULD FIT
TOGETHER NATURALLY: Just as the words in a sentence should be
arranged for smooth reading, so should the sentences in a message. Each
sentence should smoothly follow the previous one and flow naturally to the next
one. Similarly, one paragraph should lead naturally to the next paragraph to
guide the reader from one central thought or point to the next.
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